Session Group Details
Student
Emma, Johnson
Subject
English Writing
Tutor
Mr. James Park
Test Date
25-Jul-26
Homework :
Draft a 500-word personal statement outline.
Tutor's Comments :
Emma's essay structure is improving. Work on voice and specific examples.
Homework :
Revise introduction paragraph and add transitions.
Tutor's Comments :
Strong improvement on clarity. Work on the conclusion next.
Homework :
Write a full draft of the activities essay.
Tutor's Comments :
Emma has a strong narrative voice. Needs tighter editing for word count.
Homework :
Peer-review two sample college essays.
Tutor's Comments :
Critical analysis skills improving. Apply same rigor to her own writing.
Homework :
Revise the diversity essay with new examples.
Tutor's Comments :
Excellent session on vivid detail. Draft is nearly submission-ready.
Homework :
Finalize common app essay; proofread three times.
Tutor's Comments :
Emma's writing has matured significantly this semester. Great progress.
Homework :
Write a 250-word why-us essay for top-choice school.
Tutor's Comments :
Focused session on school research and tailoring language. Strong draft.
Homework :
Complete supplemental essay edits for all schools.
Tutor's Comments :
All essays are at high quality. Minor refinements remain.
Homework :
Draft a 500-word personal statement outline.
Tutor's Comments :
Emma's essay structure is improving. Work on voice and specific examples.
Homework :
Revise introduction paragraph and add transitions.
Tutor's Comments :
Strong improvement on clarity. Work on the conclusion next.
Homework :
Write a full draft of the activities essay.
Tutor's Comments :
Emma has a strong narrative voice. Needs tighter editing for word count.